Once upond a time ther was a wich who was way wicked. She had a red nose. She lived in the forest. She turned the grass large. She turned the grass 10 feet tall. A marine put prffum on the grass.so no one will get flees. So the animals could see ther pray and all lived happily ever after.
By Ethan
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Ethan,
What a neat fairy tale! I like the way you included a marine to save everyone from the fleas! You had many elements of a fairy tale, like "once upon a time", and a wicked character (the witch), and "happily ever after". You also included animal characters in your story! I have a question for you. How did the tall grass help the animals see their prey? Let me know what you think.
Love,
Ms. Edwards
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